Please find attached our comments, recommendations and suggestions for the next deliverable. The comments are in a different color inside the text, and I also made a few more in the margins (see revisions pane in Word and select all markup). We did not make many language revisions, so this will be your responsibility to enhance the language level, revise the draft thoroughly as well as add more sources, especially in the last pillar of your literature review, (when you boil the general problem down to a specific problem).